I got in touch with an editor today and I'm sending it off to them to be... edited. Rofl
I'm really nervous. They could easily turn around and tell me there is no hope for my book. Eek.
But hopefully they'll tell me that my book does have potential and what I need to alter in it.
I altered the whole manuscript like they told me to and the book has gone from being 197 pages to 335 pages O.O
At least it's looking more like a book now
95,062 words
335 pages
25 chapters
It's looking promising!









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Spare me just, three last words
"I Love You" is all she heard
I'll wait for you,
But I can't wait forever...(Hawthorne Heights)
I miss the days on deviantART when making a unique character DIDN'T mean creating a whole breed to follow it.
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Sometimes we run away just to see if someone loves us enough to follow
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Then Suddenly!
Nothing happened
But it happened suddenly
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A carousel is like life, it has it's up's it's down't and horses.
I'm Rhi in RL and DG online
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A carousel is like life, it has it's up's it's down't and horses.
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A carousel is like life, it has it's up's it's down't and horses.
any new news yet. sorry i forgot to check deviantart, i was out for my dads birthday
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rightttt... sure thats why im near enough a grade A student anyways even if i do flunk in the tests, Mc Donalds always pays good
> Congratulations... you're broke. Have fun living on the streets when you're old.
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>> i work too, yet my money goes into my parents business, i dont ever see a penny of it, so dont start that
>> and anyways i dont play, Kels looks after the horses i just come on check my email and kill a few horses here and there to help Kels
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>>> I work to get my money you ass hole. I have a job. My parents help me pay for my horse. I get nothing else from them. And if you think this game is so stupid, why do you even play?
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>>>> wow lucky you for having extra money, must be nice to be spoilt
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>>>>> Lets think about this... I have extra money i dont give a damn about... i feel like having something to do on rainy days... why not buy some passes.
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>>>>>> rather be an ass than spending my money on pixel horses
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>>>>>>> You're really an ass you know that?
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>>>>>>>> you'd just be wasting your time anyways
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>>>>>>>>> You know... when i first found out... I was going to thank you for admitting your mistake... But you know what. I can save my thanks for someone who really deserves it.
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>>>>>>>>>> earlier i felt guilty for what i did but now, i feel freaking brilliant because your really deserved it
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>>>>>>>>>>> Oh you are so very welcome
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>>>>>>>>>>>> i know i have a anger problem, have known since i was 11
>>>>>>>>>>>> thanks sooo much for pointing it out!
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>>>>>>>>>>>>> At least i dont have facking anger management like you do
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>> blame me all you want, at least my life doesnt evolve around pixels
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I didn't give my password to you though. it technically is your fault for attempting to get revenge over a silly little change in names so that I could blup my own damn horse
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> you gave your pass out, got into the wrong hands, end of. Your fault for giving it out, howrse does say keep it safe
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> no thanks, i can butt into my girlfriend's emails all i want because she lets me
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> also no thanks, i dont wanna shoot myself
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Wait a second. I didn't say a damn thing to her. I just changed the fricking name to KELS DONT TOUCH so she knows I want to use the horse. And by the way, I wasn't the damn problem in the breeding partnership. And it wasn't Ponys fault either. She took passes from her without asking or telling. I have never purposely hurt Kels and I still consider her my friend. Now you should butt out of the emails that I send or HC sends to her or else go shoot yourself in the damn head.
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Kels hasnt got anything to do with the deletion of you account, as you've probably read from the email, i found out about the horse and found your password in one of her emails (yes i read her emails) and started to kill the horse, i realised it was immortal so then deleted your account
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> What do you expect me to do when someone does something like that to the girl i love? i werent going to stand there and let people like you! walk all over her. Shes been hurt countless numbers of times by you and your little "breeding party"
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> So what if you hate me... i really dont care what you think
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Oh and another thing, if your her friend.. why didnt you just send her an email saying thanks for the help i dont need it... true friends dont hurt eachother
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>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> I'm very angry... The worst you should have done was killed the frickin horse. I've spent so much time and money on this game and not even funny. Is that clear? Did you even talk to Kels before you did this? And I was just upset because first, I told her many times that I would like 2 lessons done every day or else its a waste of my passes. I wasn't that angry, just enough to tell her to get away from the horse. Mostly I told her to stop because I was back from school and just wanted to work on my own damn horse. I never exactly said a word directly to Kels for a while. And I don't know if you understand this, but Kels is my friend. And I don't know if she knows about this, but I would like to talk to her. I'm not going to "be mean" I just want to know who did what. You lost my my life, you know that.. I hate you
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Life sucks, and then you die- Jacob Black
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Life sucks, and then you die- Jacob Black
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